Once begun, a good play will write itself. In this case, the motive of the character’s agony and vengeance wrote this rhyming short narrative.
The brothers Zeal and Ardor have to attempt a journey full of deceptions, trials and the constant strain of despair. Driven by their hate against their father, they soon will have to face reality. For there lurk greater evils than simple emotions.
The Master of Kin consists of rhyming quatrains written in three acts. Once a trial is overcome or a new one must be conquered, the setting will change which is always carried by a short description and then further embellished by the rhyming narrator.
Can not yet be aquired as I am currently trying to publish it.
To provide a small insight into the narrative I will describe its landscape:
The Land of Nus lies to the West of Garden Eden. Our brothers were born in Mortest, a rural village which once was the heart of a blooming country. It’s citizens and dwellings are rotten and filled to the brink with vermin and the taste of failure. In their hateful relation to their father this decayed spot on the map marks their starting point. As their father is said to be on the Northern Star, a colossus of a mountain piercing the clouds, they always have their destination in sight. The Northern Star carries it’s name for it’s terrifying height and the hot sun always shining on it’s snow covered top. Citizens across the land therefore tell tales of the mountain rivaling a star and being a sanctuary for celestials, holy grounds unable to be reached by man.
Patrick Muczczek 
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